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Original: 8/19/2007 2:00 PM
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Sunday, August 19, 2007

 Visiting the Freezing Point of Air

"And we'll never go back and we'll never go back and we'll never go back,"
You say, in dream-talk, while I sit
in a pillow-infested love seat beneath the wall flowers.
Two hands hold a camera, my memory machine made well. A shutter snap and a flash,

A flash again  a flash of teeth  accompany the moment,
the moment frozen in time while life speeds by. I could beg
You to sleep forever, sweet little
soul, sold and sent my way to strike a split
in the monotony, but think how monotonous sleep is!

You aren't meant to lay in an unconscious blanket of peace,
a bed of dreams that I wish I could photograph along with the tears
and smirks that streak across your face, and it was only another moment
ago that I realized that you, like the tears, would streak across the room and out the door
At the speed of life.

This is that point in time, in temperature,
where I can feel the Panic rise from the ground
and from the thick atmosphere that grows ever thicker, and I know
that when it hits my head and penetrates my lungs, I will sit in a new position:
Catatonic.

Sucking on a rush of red, my heart, my blood machine blasts away until the imminent flash before my eyes clicks it
Down to a softer tempo;
I have read that I should enjoy every second as if it were my last, so I take my final glances
at your lovely being, and then the fear subsides. Immobilized in the solid air, I will sit in a new photograph:
With you, and with the world around me, a shot I could never capture alone.

A flash again  a flash of teeth  accompanies the moment,
the moment frozen in time while life speeds by.
I beg you please, by my machine: Sleep forever, in beauty, in the reverie,
and we will never go back.

 Posted 8/19/2007 2:00 PM - 121 Views - 12 eProps - 9 comments

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Visit oggelen's Xanga Site!

Ha. Thanks. In all seriousness, that made me feel better.

and, you're writing is beautiful. And I'm sick with jealousy.
And I think you've improved while I've not been on xanga. It's more rhythmic and poetic. Maybe that's just this piece but, I love it.

Posted 8/19/2007 5:26 PM by oggelen - reply

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I'm lost for words.

Posted 8/19/2007 10:42 PM by StarlahMantra Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

Visit FiveFourMeasure's Xanga Site!
RYC: I would rather listen to NPR than the bland, pre-fabricated music. Of course, if you were using sarcasm in that message then it completely flew over my head, so use cues.
Posted 8/20/2007 9:26 PM by FiveFourMeasure - reply

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You got rid of kitty cat! =O

I'll break YOU.
Posted 8/20/2007 10:13 PM by C_XI - reply

Visit StarlahMantra's Xanga Site!
For the first time since I "found" you, you commented right above me on Caka. hah.

you made the men all neat and lined up on the side.

I love doggies, too. That bastard.
Posted 8/23/2007 1:02 AM by StarlahMantra Xanga True Member Xanga Premium Member - reply

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Beautiful!!! Wow!
Posted 8/23/2007 2:18 PM by kissthewake Xanga True Member - reply

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Yes, I am a mastermind of plans and conceptions.  Maybe I should stop because everyone ends up happy except for me.  
Posted 8/23/2007 3:09 PM by messwiththebest_dieliketherest - reply

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His full name is Danny Boy. But he has many nicknames. (:

Thank you!

Ahhh, I guess I'm just being selfish in thinking I can have all the stars for myself, eh? Greeeed! I suppose you're right. And I'll get many more chances to capture them anyways. I don't believe they are going anywhere anytime soon. haha
Posted 8/23/2007 3:26 PM by kissthewake Xanga True Member - reply

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I'm not experimenting.  Its just, what's a girl to do when aren't any straight, available guys around?

Posted 8/26/2007 9:57 AM by messwiththebest_dieliketherest - reply


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